A Deadly Endowment – Alyssa Maxwell

In the latest installment of the Lady and Lady’s Maid mystery series by Alyssa Maxwell, Lady Phoebe Renshaw and her maid Eva Huntford are enthusiastic about opening the Renshaw family estate for tours. However, the rest of the Renshaw family has some misgivings, which are soon realized beyond their expectations when a tour guest is found strangled in their library. It’s not exactly an auspicious start to their tours, and soon Phoebe and Eva are embroiled in finding the right culprit to the crime, despite the “interference” of the local, bumbling police inspector. 

The Lady and Lady’s Maid series are lighthearted and cozy reads. The plots are usually pretty solid, although I did guess the culprit towards the end of this one. Along with Phoebe’s story, which lately has been focused on her investigative prowess, readers follow her sister Julia as well. Her story has been drama-filled enough to make readers forget that Phoebe, Eva, and Amelia (the other Renshaw sister) haven’t had much going on for the past three books. This is a pattern that I’ve really started to notice with this novel, but I hope we see some character development from someone else other than Julia. 

Lack of character development is something I’ve noticed on the whole as I’ve read more of the Renshaw family saga. I think it’s something to do with the writing style, as certain characters (Grams, Grandpapa, and Fox) are written to kind of just hop in and out of the story. They’re very consistent in maintaining their negative/tolerant attitudes towards Phoebe and her investigations throughout the series, even though her accomplishments should impress them. Lady Phoebe also shows slim development as the series goes on as she’s written as a character that can Do No Wrong; she doesn’t make any mistakes during her investigations, and, for some reason, feels constantly responsible for worrying about everything and everyone in her path. As the books are narrated from either her or Eva’s points of view, it makes her seem very spoiled and naive. 

What proved Lady Phoebe’s naivete to me in this novel was that when Julia went away without telling anyone, Phoebe went overboard with worry as if she and Julia hadn’t been fairly estranged for most of their adult relationship. She also determined not to tell her grandmother that Julia was away, thinking that her grandmother would be too upset and she could solve the issue without her grandmother ever knowing. I found this to be a really childish reaction, especially as Julia is very responsible, she’s an adult, has been married, and should be able to leave a property by herself without anyone getting in a tizzy. 

The Lady and Lady’s Maid series is entertaining, but it is written fairly simply – although not as irritatingly simply as the Kurland St. Mary series by Catherine Lloyd. I actually think Julia’s line of the story is what keeps me reading, and I’m surprised by that as she’s a lesser character in the novels than Phoebe and Eva. But, I find her to be the most real of all the characters and, for me, the most relatable. I am happy to read the next installment of this series when I need a cheerful, easy, cozy mystery.

Thank you to NetGalley, Alyssa Maxwell, and Kensington Books for the complimentary copy of this book in return for an honest review. The opinions expressed in this review are entirely my own.

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I am an avid reader and lover of historical mysteries and romances, but happy to take review requests and expand my horizons! All opinions in this blog are my own and have been given freely.

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